The first ZIP haiku ever written:
slowly I search a field of flowers
finding nothing but beauty
- John E. Carley 1999
First poet to publicly adopt the style:
autumn walk without his net
and now so many butterflies
- Owen L. Burkhart 2000
First winner of a Zip kukai (contest):
this morning... the plush peonies
and your warm breath... in my hair
- Marjorie Buettner 2000
Q: What is a 'zip'?
A: A 'zip' is a formal pattern for writing short, Japanese style, verse in English. It is an alternative to the three line - 5/7/5 - pattern.
The 'zip' has a fixed total of 15 syllables deployed at will over two lines, each line broken by a triple space (caesura). The layout centres on these caesurae.
For more details, see John E. Carley
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