Haiku + Senryu

Haiku is a seasonal, reverent celebration of a subject (nature or people) trying to make a feeling.
Senryu tends to have a victim and may be humorous or irreverant trying to make a point.
- paraphrased from Michael Dylan Welch's Graceguts

Thursday, 10 July 2014

wild outdoor party...




wild outdoor party
winter-logged guests are welcome
to stay inside

eerie winds moan
translucent mists blur
guarded party doors



Linking to:
Haiku Horizons - Party
Three Word Wednesday

15 comments:

Arushi said...

A really happy and cozy haiku.... Loved it....

Jae Rose said...

I like how it ended with the guarded doors...a kind of party by invitation...sounds intriguing..

Reading Pleasure said...

Nicely done, Gemma.

Alice Audrey said...

Winter-logged or not, it sounds like a cool party. I want to be there.

J Cosmo Newbery said...

Guard the cutlery too.

Sumana Roy said...

very well written...

Kalpana Solsi said...

Looks like a warm party is going on inside.............

rajkumarmilan said...

o so beautiful ! i fell in love with the second one ! feel like its a mysterious party !

Apurva Kandicuppa said...

the second one is indeed beautiful! :) loved it

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

That photo does NOT look like my kind of party weather! ;)

jazzytower said...

Loved the photo as well!

Splendid Empress said...

Enjoyed your haiku and exploring your blog.

Spectra Ghostseeker said...

I'm the sort who would probably be hanging out on the deck regardless of the weather. I'm really not much for crowds.
You said it all in just a few words. :-)
My entry is here.
http://dothedead.wordpress.com/2014/07/12/nuclear-holocaust-2179-the-looming-spectre/

jennifaye said...

Found this on 3WW. I liked the "guarded party doors"...conjures images in my mind.

Gillena Cox said...

luv the image, the first haiku my favourite. have a nice Sunday

much love...

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