wild outdoor party
winter-logged guests are welcome
to stay inside
eerie winds moan
translucent mists blur
guarded party doors
Linking to:
Haiku Horizons - Party
Three Word Wednesday
“Giddy grasshopper/ Take care...do not leap and crush/ These pearls of dewdrop” ― Issa(1763-1827) - Japanese Haiku
15 comments:
A really happy and cozy haiku.... Loved it....
I like how it ended with the guarded doors...a kind of party by invitation...sounds intriguing..
Nicely done, Gemma.
Winter-logged or not, it sounds like a cool party. I want to be there.
Guard the cutlery too.
very well written...
Looks like a warm party is going on inside.............
o so beautiful ! i fell in love with the second one ! feel like its a mysterious party !
the second one is indeed beautiful! :) loved it
That photo does NOT look like my kind of party weather! ;)
Loved the photo as well!
Enjoyed your haiku and exploring your blog.
I'm the sort who would probably be hanging out on the deck regardless of the weather. I'm really not much for crowds.
You said it all in just a few words. :-)
My entry is here.
http://dothedead.wordpress.com/2014/07/12/nuclear-holocaust-2179-the-looming-spectre/
Found this on 3WW. I liked the "guarded party doors"...conjures images in my mind.
luv the image, the first haiku my favourite. have a nice Sunday
much love...
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