Haiku + Senryu

Haiku is a seasonal, reverent celebration of a subject (nature or people) trying to make a feeling.
Senryu tends to have a victim and may be humorous or irreverant trying to make a point.
- paraphrased from Michael Dylan Welch's Graceguts

Saturday, 1 June 2013

Stone




foundation of stone
frantic shufflings circle by
a cold unmoved heart


Linking to:
Haiku Heights ~ Stone


NOTE

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8 comments:

Maggie Grace said...

Deeply layered haiku...fooled by the photo. Nicely done.

cheryl said...

Stones can be so cold but when one looks there is so much colour and warmth. You've captured the chill of a lost stone wonderfully Gemma

Susie Clevenger said...

I didn't expect where the haiku would go from my first glance at the photo...creative!

Usha Menon said...

AWWW.A hHaiku with a depth! The image is scintillating.

mindlovemisery said...

This is fantastic =)

Nanka said...

The stones form a strong foundation, and yet the majestic display of running water, as it descends to the ground,leaves them so unperturbed!! Your click today is fantastic!!

Reshma said...

Alas the strength of the stone means that once the heart hurts and decides to toughen, it becomes weak to relish the wonders of life...

Reading Pleasure said...

So profound

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