“Giddy grasshopper/ Take care...do not leap and crush/ These pearls of dewdrop” ― Issa(1763-1827) - Japanese Haiku
Deeply layered haiku...fooled by the photo. Nicely done.
Stones can be so cold but when one looks there is so much colour and warmth. You've captured the chill of a lost stone wonderfully Gemma
I didn't expect where the haiku would go from my first glance at the photo...creative!
AWWW.A hHaiku with a depth! The image is scintillating.
This is fantastic =)
The stones form a strong foundation, and yet the majestic display of running water, as it descends to the ground,leaves them so unperturbed!! Your click today is fantastic!!
Alas the strength of the stone means that once the heart hurts and decides to toughen, it becomes weak to relish the wonders of life...
So profound
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Deeply layered haiku...fooled by the photo. Nicely done.
Stones can be so cold but when one looks there is so much colour and warmth. You've captured the chill of a lost stone wonderfully Gemma
I didn't expect where the haiku would go from my first glance at the photo...creative!
AWWW.A hHaiku with a depth! The image is scintillating.
This is fantastic =)
The stones form a strong foundation, and yet the majestic display of running water, as it descends to the ground,leaves them so unperturbed!! Your click today is fantastic!!
Alas the strength of the stone means that once the heart hurts and decides to toughen, it becomes weak to relish the wonders of life...
So profound
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