Haiku + Senryu

Haiku is a seasonal, reverent celebration of a subject (nature or people) trying to make a feeling.
Senryu tends to have a victim and may be humorous or irreverant trying to make a point.
- paraphrased from Michael Dylan Welch's Graceguts

Sunday, 1 March 2015

bruised souls...




bruised souls
beating the bars in
dizzy duet


Linking to:
Carpe Diem Sparkling Stars #19 jazz haiku

5 comments:

Jackie Le Poidevin said...

Great rhythm and sound to this, Gemma. Really captures the jazz theme

Prem Laszlo Shrock Riesbeck Ottino said...

love that blow.

Kristjaan Panneman said...

Awesome to see you here again Gemma and what a nice 'jazz-haiku'.

Blog It Or Lose It said...

The bruised souls --- nicely done :)

jazzytower said...

Love that first line, says it all. Beautifully done.

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