Haiku + Senryu
Haiku is a seasonal, reverent celebration of a subject (nature or people) trying to make a feeling.
Senryu tends to have a victim and may be humorous or irreverant trying to make a point.
- paraphrased from Michael Dylan Welch's
Graceguts 
6 comments:
Don't you just hate it when a perfectly good celebration is ruined? ;)
rain- tears... ah, lovely way to be disappointed for a celebration
tinsel is not bad - don't rain on my parade :-)
nice take.
i guess that's why we have umbrellas
cheers!
jzb
"tinsel tears" -- love it -- that's a great image. :)
Oh, Gemma, that is just wonderful!
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