Haiku + Senryu

Haiku is a seasonal, reverent celebration of a subject (nature or people) trying to make a feeling.
Senryu tends to have a victim and may be humorous or irreverant trying to make a point.
- paraphrased from Michael Dylan Welch's Graceguts

Friday, 17 January 2014

ambiguous...




rain starts rain stops
heat wave sentence ends or
begins again


NOTE
Today is our 4th day of heat wave - over 40 degrees centigrade.
The photo is of my verandah this afternoon.
It rained for about 3 minutes.
The rain must have been direct.
The verandah section on the right did not get wet at all - roof overhang.


Linking to:
National Haiku Writing Month - Facebook prompts - ambiguous

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