Haiku + Senryu

Haiku is a seasonal, reverent celebration of a subject (nature or people) trying to make a feeling.
Senryu tends to have a victim and may be humorous or irreverant trying to make a point.
- paraphrased from Michael Dylan Welch's Graceguts

Monday, 10 March 2014

return...


a view of the crowds at the recent annual Kite Festival on the Rosebud foreshore...


sun blessed skies
flying souls return on
willing winds


Linking to:
Haiku Horizons - return

14 comments:

oneofaclass said...

I like the idea of flying souls returning. I'm looking forward to the local kite fest in May.

alicekeysmd said...

What a strong spiritual feeling you've created here. Nice. :-)

Locomente said...

Such a different take...
Admiring!

rajkumarmilan said...

wow ! love every words !
willing wind ...flying souls ....awesome .

Kalpana Solsi said...

Flying souls ; beautifully interpreted.

Reading Pleasure said...

Very nice!

Ramesh Sood said...

Lovely.. willing winds were beautiful..

RS:)

Kathy Combs said...

Beautifully expressed. The kites make me long for spring!

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

It's the willing winds that add charm and truth to this little piece.

Returning to the Cornfields

Panchali said...

Loved this one, very creative, Gemma!

Reshma said...

Bless the flying souls, they bring so much joy. loved the imagery Gemma :)

cheryl said...

This is so peaceful Gemma, colourful souls returning, just lovely.

WabiSabi said...

I love the feelings evoked with your words and the happy photo! Lovely!

payal agarwal said...

lovely picture.. "willing winds" beautifully penned!:)

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