Haiku + Senryu

Haiku is a seasonal, reverent celebration of a subject (nature or people) trying to make a feeling.
Senryu tends to have a victim and may be humorous or irreverant trying to make a point.
- paraphrased from Michael Dylan Welch's Graceguts

Sunday, 9 March 2014

scrap...




footprints of rain
littered with scraps of
somewhere else 


Linking to:
Haiku Horizons - scrap

7 comments:

BelindaBroughton said...

this is a gem

Reshma said...

Beautiful imagery Gemma, rain never fails to evoke long lost thoughts...

Mark M. Redfearn said...

"scraps of somewhere else"

What power in that breath!

oneofaclass said...

Very nice! It's amazing just where you might come across "somewhere else". And the perfect image to go with your haiku!

rajkumarmilan said...

nice words ...descrptive of a wandering mind in a few words . love it !

alicekeysmd said...

I like the image of "littered with scraps of somewhere else". It got tracked in with the water. Good one.

Lolly Williams said...

Beautiful phrase "scraps of somewhere else." I love how it lingers in my mind long after I've walked away from the computer. :)

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