Haiku + Senryu

Haiku is a seasonal, reverent celebration of a subject (nature or people) trying to make a feeling.
Senryu tends to have a victim and may be humorous or irreverant trying to make a point.
- paraphrased from Michael Dylan Welch's Graceguts

Monday, 24 March 2014

sand...



sand welcomes... the waves of time 
while  footprints are weighed... and measured


NOTE:
I have chosen to use the zip haiku form

Linking to:
Haiku Horizons - sand

10 comments:

Locomente said...

Thats a new Haiku form... I was not aware of the same... Thank you :)

Reading Pleasure said...

Deep words. beautifully done, Gemma.

Kathy Combs said...

Waves are timeless. Lovely!

alicekeysmd said...

Lovely. I like the feeling of weighing and measuring footsteps. It made me stop andthink.

Kristjaan Panneman said...

A beauty Gemma.

Sumana Roy said...

learned something new today...nice thoughts..

Milan Rajkumar said...

so philosophical...woven like a Persian carpet !

cheryl said...

Very profound Gemma

Reshma said...

Zip Haiku, now that looks interesting. Loved the way you wove in calculative nature of world with change in time Gemma.

beccagivens said...

I like discovering new forms of Haiku ... thank you for sharing!

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