Haiku + Senryu

Haiku is a seasonal, reverent celebration of a subject (nature or people) trying to make a feeling.
Senryu tends to have a victim and may be humorous or irreverant trying to make a point.
- paraphrased from Michael Dylan Welch's Graceguts

Saturday, 23 February 2013

Castle


Part of the Toytopia 2012 sand sculpture exhibition on the Frankston foreshore of Port Phillip Bay.


Summer sand castle
Like building a summer dream
To last the winter


Linking to:
Carpe Diem ~ A Daily Haiku Meme~ Castle

7 comments:

theeclecticeccentricshopaholic said...

the words are lovely but that castle in the photo --gorgeous! how great that you captured it

Mark M. Redfearn said...

Show me a sand castle anywhere that has lasted a winter! :)

Building Sand Castles

Emma Major said...

lovely

Gemma Wiseman said...

I was really referring to the sandcastles as a symbol of a dream of summer (hence the "like") through the cold winters! Of course, literally, a sandcastle lasts till the next wave. Of course, there is a touch of irony! O well!

Jazzbumpa said...

sand castle
gone with the next big wave
dreams endure

Cheers!
JzB

joanne said...

I bow my head to the sand artists who do such amazing works.....since it's still winter here, I loved the reminder of what was, and is coming again..,,

Kristjaan Panneman said...

Wow! That's a sand castle ... wonderfully crafted haiku.

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