Haiku + Senryu

Haiku is a seasonal, reverent celebration of a subject (nature or people) trying to make a feeling.
Senryu tends to have a victim and may be humorous or irreverant trying to make a point.
- paraphrased from Michael Dylan Welch's Graceguts

Friday, 1 February 2013

Verdant




Bare earths of my heart
Long for the verdant landscapes
Of our old music


Linking to:
Carpe Diem ~ A Daily Haiku Meme ~ Verdant
+
Haiku Friday

11 comments:

Jazzbumpa said...

This is a wonderful haiku

I don't know what it means
But I think that's good

My poetry is seldom enigmatic in this way

Maybe I'm too constrained and literal

Cheers!
JzB

Kristjaan Panneman said...

WOW! What a wonderful picture you share here with us. I love the sphere you call on with this picture and the strong haiku accompanied ... really awesome.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Oh, this is truly a delightful little song, a bit melancholy, perhaps, but still the music warms my heart!

Tara R. said...

This makes me feel a little melancholy, longing for days gone by.

Carol L McKenna said...

Lovely photo and wonderful messages in your haiku ~

Carol of: A Creative Harbor ^_^

GrandmaK said...

There is such warmth in your haiku...Needed here today as the temp is 17 degrees! Wishing you well! Cathy

WabiSabi said...

Oh my! I can hear the sad strains of your 'old music' so clearly in your words! Thank you for sharing this!

joanne said...

your poetry often sends me on flights of fancy, and I thank you for that...

Geraldine said...

gorgeous photo and haiku! wonderful.

Brudberg said...

The break between line 2 and 3 are just brilliant.

eof777 said...

Gorgeous haiku... masterful too. :-)
Eliz

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