“Giddy grasshopper/ Take care...do not leap and crush/ These pearls of dewdrop” ― Issa(1763-1827) - Japanese Haiku
This is a wonderful haikuI don't know what it meansBut I think that's goodMy poetry is seldom enigmatic in this wayMaybe I'm too constrained and literalCheers!JzB
WOW! What a wonderful picture you share here with us. I love the sphere you call on with this picture and the strong haiku accompanied ... really awesome.
Oh, this is truly a delightful little song, a bit melancholy, perhaps, but still the music warms my heart!
This makes me feel a little melancholy, longing for days gone by.
Lovely photo and wonderful messages in your haiku ~ Carol of: A Creative Harbor ^_^
There is such warmth in your haiku...Needed here today as the temp is 17 degrees! Wishing you well! Cathy
Oh my! I can hear the sad strains of your 'old music' so clearly in your words! Thank you for sharing this!
your poetry often sends me on flights of fancy, and I thank you for that...
gorgeous photo and haiku! wonderful.
The break between line 2 and 3 are just brilliant.
Gorgeous haiku... masterful too. :-)Eliz
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This is a wonderful haiku
I don't know what it means
But I think that's good
My poetry is seldom enigmatic in this way
Maybe I'm too constrained and literal
Cheers!
JzB
WOW! What a wonderful picture you share here with us. I love the sphere you call on with this picture and the strong haiku accompanied ... really awesome.
Oh, this is truly a delightful little song, a bit melancholy, perhaps, but still the music warms my heart!
This makes me feel a little melancholy, longing for days gone by.
Lovely photo and wonderful messages in your haiku ~
Carol of: A Creative Harbor ^_^
There is such warmth in your haiku...Needed here today as the temp is 17 degrees! Wishing you well! Cathy
Oh my! I can hear the sad strains of your 'old music' so clearly in your words! Thank you for sharing this!
your poetry often sends me on flights of fancy, and I thank you for that...
gorgeous photo and haiku! wonderful.
The break between line 2 and 3 are just brilliant.
Gorgeous haiku... masterful too. :-)
Eliz
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