Haiku + Senryu

Haiku is a seasonal, reverent celebration of a subject (nature or people) trying to make a feeling.
Senryu tends to have a victim and may be humorous or irreverant trying to make a point.
- paraphrased from Michael Dylan Welch's Graceguts

Wednesday, 6 February 2013

Follow


Australia Day 2013 Fun Run going past Dromana beach


Follow the drummer
Know your rhythm and heartbeat
The drummer is you


Linking to:
Sensational Haiku Wednesday ~ Follow
+
Haiku Friday

5 comments:

Kendall Thorman said...

Very nicely done. I like the mental image it evokes.

Jazzbumpa said...

Drummer keeps the beat
Those syncopated rhythms
Come from deep inside

Cheers!
JzB

Tara Tyler said...

set the pace!
great haiku!

Hazel Ceej said...

Great take on the prompt. Love the last line.

mypoeticpath said...

I like this a lot!

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