Haiku + Senryu

Haiku is a seasonal, reverent celebration of a subject (nature or people) trying to make a feeling.
Senryu tends to have a victim and may be humorous or irreverant trying to make a point.
- paraphrased from Michael Dylan Welch's Graceguts

Sunday, 3 March 2013

Breeze...




Slow dance of ev'ning
Clouds reaching for random wings
Breeze waltzing the seas


Linking to:
Haiku Heights ~ Breeze
Straight Out of the Camera Sunday
NatureFootstep Inspiring Photography/Catching the Light

18 comments:

edenhills said...

That is a lovely haiku. I really like the music references. Beautiful scene!

cheryl said...

There is something about the word breeze that makes us want to dance. Breeze waltzing the seas, o yes !

Meester Uttley said...

Very nice. The wind does dance, doesn't it.

Adriana Dascalu said...

a beautiful read

WabiSabi said...

There aren't too any things more pleasurable than watching the breeze waltzing the sea!

photodoug said...

Recalls to mind Dancing Away With My Heart by Lady Antebellum.

Hazel Ceej said...

Ah beautiful! I love the image of the second line.

oneofaclass said...

Lovely. I especially like the image of the breeze waltzing the seas.

Judith Westerfield said...

I too love the image of breeze waltzing the seas. Beautifully crafted

Reading Pleasure said...

This is so lovely. Wonderful imagery

Siggi in Downeast Maine said...

I love the entire haiku,but the last Line
"Breeze waltzing the seas" is masterfully composted.
Peace, Siggi

Charlotta said...

Beautiful sunset shot!

Meta said...

Ser verkligen ut som molnen far fram över himlen vackert
Ha en fin vecka
Kram Meta

NatureFootstep said...

you catched some beautiful light. :)

Reshma said...

A waltz to remember!! wonderful lines Gemma:)

McGuffy Ann said...

Very nice.

eof777 said...

This is wonderful and I love the photo too. ;-)
Eliz

eof777 said...

I love the breezy words and feeling ... Lovely. Eliz

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