Haiku + Senryu

Haiku is a seasonal, reverent celebration of a subject (nature or people) trying to make a feeling.
Senryu tends to have a victim and may be humorous or irreverant trying to make a point.
- paraphrased from Michael Dylan Welch's Graceguts

Monday, 11 March 2013

Serene




In serene spaces
Earth and sky massage the soul
The mind is at peace


Linking to:
Carpe Diem ~ A Daily Haiku Meme ~ Serene
Postcards from Paradise

I don't want to be a passenger in my own life 
~ This will hurt me

14 comments:

Nonnie said...

so well said and true!

Jazzbumpa said...

a calm pond reflecting
the sky is a beautifully
tranquil image

Cheers!
JzB

WabiSabi said...

Oh my! A soul massage! That sounds wonderful!

rebecca said...

thank you gemma for this interlude of peace and beauty.

kz said...

Earth and sky massage the soul -- very lovely :)

joanne said...

lovely words...I could use a back massage myself

Dawn Elliott said...

I love the concept of the earth and sky massaging the soul...how glorious is that?

Gracy said...

What a beautiful haiku. The line on soul massage is simply awesome! And that picture complements your haiku.

Adriana Dascalu said...

lovely!

somepinkflowers said...

{{ if this were
in my neighborhood

lurking
lurking
just beneath
would
B
one fine gator ...

i am just saying !!

:-)


still,
yours looks calm & peace*filled !! }}

Stephanie said...

love seeing the world reflected...

kaykuala said...

The serene feelings can be so peaceful! Nicely Gemma!

Hank

Brudberg said...

Very peaceful

gma said...

beautiful reflection...

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