Haiku + Senryu

Haiku is a seasonal, reverent celebration of a subject (nature or people) trying to make a feeling.
Senryu tends to have a victim and may be humorous or irreverant trying to make a point.
- paraphrased from Michael Dylan Welch's Graceguts

Sunday, 20 January 2013

Dusk




When dusk surrounds me
Will you be there sharing smiles
Of our precious days


Linking to:
Haiku Heights ~ Dusk

20 comments:

Eko said...

Nice work - pictures ...
Greeting Eko
Finland / Lapland / Kuusamo
http://eskoalamaunu.blogspot.fi/

cheryl said...

Your words fit the photo perfectly Gemma

Cressida de Nova said...

Tender haiku..I hope that person will be there for you.

Judith Westerfield said...

Gentle words, gentle sentiments. Enjoyed!

kaykuala said...

When the day comes to a close, those dear to us are the ones who provide the company, and no one else! Nicely Gemma!

Hank

The Write Girl said...

What a beautiful and heartfelt wish. May it come to pass!

Robyn Greenhouse said...

A beautiful photo!

Mirage said...

Gorgeous haiku!

Kendall Thorman said...

Love it!

razzamadazzle said...

Beautiful photograph, and I love your haiku question.

alicekeysmd said...

Sad. Like death is the dying of the day and dsuk is the dying of us. Lovely and good words.

Lady In Read said...

very touching..

Emma Major said...

wonderful

Meenakshi Malhotra said...

Everyone wishes for such a companionship.

great haiku!

Hazel Ceej said...

Tis the nice part of dusk - opportunity to reminisce those good, old precious days.

Xtine said...

rich and deep, beautiful! christine

eof777 said...

Great question and photo to give it more... Like this.
Eliz
Mine is: http://positivekismet.blogspot.com/2013/01/musings-haiku-small-stones-at-dusk.html

Sanjana Pareek said...

aahan!! Good one! well put. Its overwhelming how each of us have such varied and equally delighting interpretations of the same prompt! I enjoyed this post. Thank you :)

njn-sorceress.blogspot.com

heavenhappens said...

Ah that is nice, dusk is such a lovely time to spend relaxing with someone you are at ease with. x Lovely haiku.

Jennifer Cooper said...

beautiful and sad

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