Haiku + Senryu

Haiku is a seasonal, reverent celebration of a subject (nature or people) trying to make a feeling.
Senryu tends to have a victim and may be humorous or irreverant trying to make a point.
- paraphrased from Michael Dylan Welch's Graceguts

Sunday 20 January 2013

Dusk




When dusk surrounds me
Will you be there sharing smiles
Of our precious days


Linking to:
Haiku Heights ~ Dusk

19 comments:

Eko said...

Nice work - pictures ...
Greeting Eko
Finland / Lapland / Kuusamo
http://eskoalamaunu.blogspot.fi/

cheryl said...

Your words fit the photo perfectly Gemma

Cressida de Nova said...

Tender haiku..I hope that person will be there for you.

Judith Westerfield said...

Gentle words, gentle sentiments. Enjoyed!

kaykuala said...

When the day comes to a close, those dear to us are the ones who provide the company, and no one else! Nicely Gemma!

Hank

The Write Girl said...

What a beautiful and heartfelt wish. May it come to pass!

Unknown said...

A beautiful photo!

Vinati said...

Gorgeous haiku!

Unknown said...

Love it!

Anonymous said...

Beautiful photograph, and I love your haiku question.

Anonymous said...

Sad. Like death is the dying of the day and dsuk is the dying of us. Lovely and good words.

Lady In Read said...

very touching..

Woman'n'Beyond said...

Everyone wishes for such a companionship.

great haiku!

Hazel said...

Tis the nice part of dusk - opportunity to reminisce those good, old precious days.

Xtine said...

rich and deep, beautiful! christine

Eliz Frank said...

Great question and photo to give it more... Like this.
Eliz
Mine is: http://positivekismet.blogspot.com/2013/01/musings-haiku-small-stones-at-dusk.html

Sanjana said...

aahan!! Good one! well put. Its overwhelming how each of us have such varied and equally delighting interpretations of the same prompt! I enjoyed this post. Thank you :)

njn-sorceress.blogspot.com

Anonymous said...

Ah that is nice, dusk is such a lovely time to spend relaxing with someone you are at ease with. x Lovely haiku.

Unknown said...

beautiful and sad

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