Haiku + Senryu

Haiku is a seasonal, reverent celebration of a subject (nature or people) trying to make a feeling.
Senryu tends to have a victim and may be humorous or irreverant trying to make a point.
- paraphrased from Michael Dylan Welch's Graceguts

Sunday, 7 April 2013

A drowning...




waves, my dogs and I
we choose our rhythms and sounds
your music's drowned out


Linking to:
Haiku Heights ~ April Heights Haiku Month ~ OPEN DAY
Straight Out of the Camera Sunday

11 comments:

Sam Edge said...

Nice moment captured

wabisabipoet said...

Perfect, when you can drown out the dissonant sounds, isn't it! :) Nice capture of solitude!

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The Write Girl said...

What a beautiful scene. Lovely haiku.

Nanka said...

You seem more powerful than thunder and so much peace!! Love the clicks from your marvelous place!!

Green Speck said...

You captured the scene wonderfully :-)

poetry-diary.com said...

I like the use of watery images - waves/drowned - I feel myself wanting her to take the headphones off and just listen to the waves!

heavenhappens said...

well done x always play to the music you choose x you sound very positive x loved the photo too so summery x

Ramesh Sood said...

I can hear the shapes...so soothing to my ears and I can see music...fun haiku Gemma..love it..

http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/04/orange-spills-on-water.html

RS

Maggie said...

I very much relate to being in your own zone with unwanted sounds being drown out. Beautiful capture of that moment!

SweetTalkingGuy said...

The concentration is intense, lovely dogs!
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Nonnie said...

aah, wonderful!
I grow weary from "music" loudly invading my ears in stores.

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