Haiku + Senryu

Haiku is a seasonal, reverent celebration of a subject (nature or people) trying to make a feeling.
Senryu tends to have a victim and may be humorous or irreverant trying to make a point.
- paraphrased from Michael Dylan Welch's Graceguts

Tuesday, 23 April 2013

Tsunami




rising winter tides
boiled by roaring icy winds
tsunami feeling


Linking to:
Haiku Heights ~ April Heights Haiku Month ~ Tsunami

12 comments:

WabiSabi said...

That sounds very scary. Reminds me of the air before a hurricane...also scary!

Maggie said...

I imagine there was a kind of innate feeling in some before the tsunami. I hope I never know it. Nicely done.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

That is a powerful feeling indeed!

Tsunami of Graces

Nanka said...

Looks like the mighty ocean is brewing something in the cauldron!! Only pray that it does not boil over!!

KISLAYA GOPAL said...

Very fearful sensation indeed! It sends chill down my spine!

mindlovemisery said...

This is wonderfully chilling, really imposes a sense of dread

Satya said...

Poetic it is!

wordcoaster said...

You've really captured emotion in your words--wonderfully written :)

Reading Pleasure said...

Powerful, Gemma

alicekeysmd said...

That tsunami feeling. A great metaphor.

Sara McNulty said...

This is wonderful and chilling in every sense of the word.

Green Speck said...

A tsunami is always scary !!!

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