Haiku + Senryu

Haiku is a seasonal, reverent celebration of a subject (nature or people) trying to make a feeling.
Senryu tends to have a victim and may be humorous or irreverant trying to make a point.
- paraphrased from Michael Dylan Welch's Graceguts

Friday, 12 April 2013

Koi Pond



The koi pond landscape
Like a webbed watery sky
Lit with swimming stars




Linking to:
Haiku Heights ~ April Heights Haiku Month ~ Koi pond

10 comments:

wabisabipoet said...

Swimming stars captured my imagination and lifted my heart! Lovely sensation! Thank you!
Fascination


alicekeysmd said...

I like "swimming stars".

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

And what stars they are!

Schools of Koi

Rambly T said...

The reflection of the koi indeed are stars, very nicely worded Gemma.

Designed by Vera said...

Beautiful! I love the swimming stars...

Nanka said...

Such an amazingly clear picture (actual and the written :) both) 'webbed watery' and 'swimming stars' creates magic!!

Ramesh Sood said...

Swimming stars took me along with them..Gemma.. beautiful haiku..

RS

Reading Pleasure said...

lovely imagery

Emma Major said...

love that imagery
http://llmcalling.blogspot.co.uk/2013/04/care-for-his-world-napowrimodaytwelve.html

Green Speck said...

Swimming stars ... that's just WOW !!!

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