Haiku + Senryu

Haiku is a seasonal, reverent celebration of a subject (nature or people) trying to make a feeling.
Senryu tends to have a victim and may be humorous or irreverant trying to make a point.
- paraphrased from Michael Dylan Welch's Graceguts

Wednesday, 10 April 2013

Incense




Speeding travellers
Incense the serenity
Of gentle spirits


Linking to:
Haiku Heights ~ April Heights Haiku Month ~ Incense

11 comments:

alicekeysmd said...

Both the smell of burnt fuel AND the annoyance.

Tigerbrite said...

Yes:)

highfiveandraspberries said...

they certainly do

Rambly T said...

Gemma a different view but how clever...and yes speedboats break the serenity of everything :-(

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

They incense my serenity too!

Incense

Jazzbumpa said...

The OTHER incense.

Well done!

Cheers!
JzB

Panchali said...

I love the reference to the speedy traveler...they certainly do!!Lovely...

Pranita said...

A very different take! Enjoyed it immensely

Nanka said...

Menacing ..!! Someone's pleasure is another's threat!!

Reading Pleasure said...

A clever take on the prompt

wabisabipoet said...

As a sailor who savors the silence of the sails, these boats incense me too!! Good take on this prompt!
Incense

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