Haiku + Senryu

Haiku is a seasonal, reverent celebration of a subject (nature or people) trying to make a feeling.
Senryu tends to have a victim and may be humorous or irreverant trying to make a point.
- paraphrased from Michael Dylan Welch's Graceguts

Monday, 15 April 2013

Morning Mist

sea mist of morning
wild waters roar in hushed tones
like muted feelings

Linking to:
Haiku Heights ~ April Heights Haiku Month ~ Morning mist


Rambly T said...

Gemma - very nice, I especially liked the middle line.

Anonymous said...

I really like "hushed tones like muted feelings". Very nice.

Anonymous said...

Sometimes those wild waters have a deafening roar too! :) I wrote about the ocean mist in one of mine today too!

Maggie said...

Beautiful haiku. Love the roar in hushed tones compared to muted feelings.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Mist does have the uncanny ability to mute the roaring of the sea.

Morning Mist

Panchali said...

magnificent...serene...both the pic and your words. You're truly wonderful with words...lovely!

Nanka said...

Very good sound and sight effect, I can actually hear the hiss of sea spray!!
Gemma this is one of your best photographs!!

Reading Pleasure said...

Wonderful imagery

Anonymous said...

Beautiful. You really make me smell that salt air. :-)

Claudia said...

Now, I feel like going to the beach just to listen to the waves. :)
I like the comparison to "muted feelings".
Lovely haiku and photo!

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