sea mist of morning
wild waters roar in hushed tones
like muted feelings
Linking to:
Haiku Heights ~ April Heights Haiku Month ~ Morning mist
“Giddy grasshopper/ Take care...do not leap and crush/ These pearls of dewdrop” ― Issa(1763-1827) - Japanese Haiku
10 comments:
Gemma - very nice, I especially liked the middle line.
I really like "hushed tones like muted feelings". Very nice.
Sometimes those wild waters have a deafening roar too! :) I wrote about the ocean mist in one of mine today too!
Beautiful haiku. Love the roar in hushed tones compared to muted feelings.
Mist does have the uncanny ability to mute the roaring of the sea.
Morning Mist
magnificent...serene...both the pic and your words. You're truly wonderful with words...lovely!
Very good sound and sight effect, I can actually hear the hiss of sea spray!!
Gemma this is one of your best photographs!!
Wonderful imagery
Beautiful. You really make me smell that salt air. :-)
Now, I feel like going to the beach just to listen to the waves. :)
I like the comparison to "muted feelings".
Lovely haiku and photo!
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