Haiku + Senryu

Haiku is a seasonal, reverent celebration of a subject (nature or people) trying to make a feeling.
Senryu tends to have a victim and may be humorous or irreverant trying to make a point.
- paraphrased from Michael Dylan Welch's Graceguts

Tuesday 9 April 2013

Hunter




On wave riddled rocks
Hunter needs a line of thought
Fish for the future


Linking to:
Haiku Heights ~ April Heights Haiku Month ~ Hunter

12 comments:

Unknown said...

if only we all had such a line!

Unknown said...

Extremely clever Haiku Gemma. I loved the opening line.

Claudia said...

This type of hunting sounds pleasant. :)

KISLAYA GOPAL said...

Hmm....Thoughtful indeed!

Panchali said...

Simply beautiful~

Amrit Sinha said...

Very well observed !!!

Unknown said...

lin of thought - well done!

Nanka said...

'Line of thought' and 'future' says a lot!!

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

One hopes,of course,that the hunter gets what he needs in the way of a line of clear thought!

Hunter

Reading Pleasure said...

Very nicely done, Gemma

WabiSabi said...

What about a fish for dinner tonight?

Anonymous said...

Very nice commentary on though. Alice

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