Haiku + Senryu

Haiku is a seasonal, reverent celebration of a subject (nature or people) trying to make a feeling.
Senryu tends to have a victim and may be humorous or irreverant trying to make a point.
- paraphrased from Michael Dylan Welch's Graceguts

Monday 1 April 2013

Ascent




An ascent struggles
Demanding patience and time
Always rewarding


Linking to:
Haiku Heights ~ April Heights Haiku Month ~ Ascent

10 comments:

Maggie Grace said...

Love image of the kites...gives a feeling to the struggle of ascent.

WabiSabi said...

This is so true of every ascent I have ever made!!

Ascent

Sankara Jayanth S said...

Indeed. Indeed. Patience is important for every ascent we hope for. Wonderful haiku.

Pranita said...

Golden lesson! Well done...
Ascent to surface

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

I have little patience. Maybe that's why my ascents are so few and far between!



Ascent

Anonymous said...

I have never been able to get a kite to fly. Great picture and haiku!

Reading Pleasure said...

Inspirational

Mariya Koleva said...

I need to remind myself the final line more often, I think :-) Wise and beautiful!

Anonymous said...

Slide up, glide up into the wide up sky.Inspired, I.

Unknown said...

The fruit of patience is always sweet. :)

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